Thursday 8 March 2012

POWER





I gave you my heart
I gave you the power
To take me to the heights
To paint my life
To make me surrender
To begin and end
My day with you
To occupy every
Nook and corner of my being
To make my heart
Beat for you
To sing and dance for
The silent melodies
To think for you
To wait for you....
I gave you my heart
I gave you the power
....to hurt too.

For - Alpbhabe Thursday - P
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36 comments:

  1. It is so true that whenever we risk love, we risk hurt . . .
    Beautiful, Janaki!

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  2. <3 beautiful painting in words! <3

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  3. Oh how true! I know the how much we takes risks in love and the hurt when it is taken for granted.

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  4. Love is such a rick! It is so worth knowing that you can give it.

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  5. So often that which can be most beautiful is also given the power to hurt us. Love is one of those things, as your poem so well expressed. Thanks for participating in Poetry Jam. Here's mine:

    http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2012/03/crescendo-there-is-always-in-each-of-us.html

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  9. Love sometimes can hurt so badly, yet we can't help ourselves. We give our hearts away knowing that the pain will come. This is beautiful and so so true.

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    1. Pain is the part of this process and journey.

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  10. I ponder this quite often, how opening up and becoming vulnerable to that other person completely changes us and how we perceive the whole world. There's a beautiful quote that I posted not long ago on my FB wall:

    "It is a risk to love. What if it doesn't work out? But oh, what if it does?" - Peter McWilliams

    I love the possibilities that thought represents! :)

    - Dawn

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  11. Sadly, when we open up to allow love in, sometimes it hurts us but the pain also teaches us too but, if you've never loved you've yet to live (I believe)
    Lovely, sad, true.

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  12. Hello, you have written an incredibly poignant poem.
    The cadence is subtle as a spring lake.

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  14. Your writing is so inspiring, true deep feelings of love, and all the things that follow giving your heart away....so very nice, thanks. Karen

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  15. Love worth the risk...beautiful!

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  16. This is so true and just sings to my heart!

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  17. oh so true, but life would be so shallow without giving one's heart.

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  19. What a wonderful and meaningful piece. WE have the power!! ( and we know how to use it!!))

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  20. It's so true. We do give away our power, but I also think that in so doing we become more powerful!

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  21. Wow. What a poignant and powerful poem for the letter "P".

    Sometimes being vulnerable makes us able to love more deeply.

    Thanks for sharing this.

    A+

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